Review: These Shallow Graves by Jennifer Donnelly
Series: Stand-Alone
Published by Random House Delacorte on October 27th 2015
Genres: Young Adult Historical Fiction, YA Thriller
Pages: 496
Format: Hardcover
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I received this book for free from Publisher in exchange for an honest review. This does not affect my opinion of the book or the content of my review.
Set in gilded age New York, These Shallow Graves follows the story of Josephine Montfort, an American aristocrat. Jo lives a life of old-money ease. Not much is expected of her other than to look good and marry well. But when her father dies due to an accidental gunshot, the gilding on Jo’s world starts to tarnish. With the help of a handsome and brash reporter, and a young medical student who moonlights in the city morgue, Jo uncovers the truth behind her father’s death and learns that if you’re going to bury the past, you’d better bury it deep.
I don’t exactly know where this book and I went wrong. I really wanted to like it, and in a sense there were parts in the book that I did enjoy, but overall this was a big disappointment with me. Which sadness me because so many of my friends loved it, and I was so eager to read it myself, that it just turned into an absolute failure.
First, when I read the opening chapter I was excited. Grave digging, my imagination ran wild, I had all kinds of hopes for this book that ended up not only disappointing me but it fell completely flat.
Where do I start?
Jo. I honestly kind of hate her. She is a 17-year old that acts like she is younger, much, much, younger. Not only does she appear obtuse sometimes, but she is also naive, childish, melodramatic, too trusting, and overall not the smartest crayon in the box. Like in one scene while she is in Brooklyn, after facing so much danger already and learning the dark side of New York City, she goes ahead and thrusts some out of the mill older woman who offers her a ride back home, not even contemplating what kind of danger might be facing her trusting this woman and her husband. Now let me tell you something. I was raised in NYC and if some random older woman and her husband offered me a ride home while I was alone in a neighborhood I am not familiar with, I would run the other direction screaming fire. I guess it might just be me, but as an ex-New Yorker, I actually learned how to not trust people - an issue my husband and I choose to agree and disagree on.
Conveniently for Jo though there is always someone there to rescue her from her bad decisions, most notably Fay.
The romance was lame and honestly felt a little forced and fake. There were a few scenes that left me questioning if Eddie was actually using her for a story like her uncle has mentioned. Which in itself was never explained. When Eddie was confronted about it, he denied ever saying it, but the author never explained how Jo’s uncle pulled that one out of thin air. There wasn’t any tension and felt kind of instant.
I don’t understand why the book was over 400 pages long. It dragged a bit at times. I found myself wanting to finish it in hopes of a better ending, but everything I predicted at the beginning of the story came true, which actually only disappointed me more because it was that damn predictable. There had been parts that also felt a bit rushed and not only that but oddly written. In example, this scene, just found weird the way it was written:
“Oh, look!” Jo said. “The man sitting next to her just stood up. He knocked her gloves off the counter. Go return them to her, Oscar!”
“He’s crazy about her,” Eddie said as he watched his friend go.
Jo smiled. “I never would have guessed. Is she really a medical student?”
Maybe I would have to backtrack a little more for it to make sense on here, but stuff happened conveniently and the actions kind of felt odd?
There was mostly just the bad side of NYC at that time and good part. Not much in between.
I wanted to know more about the Tailor, he seemed kind of creepy.
I only really liked Fay in this book.
And the prologue or whatever it was that gave us a glimpse into what is happening later in the book, did not really reflect what happened later. It didn’t match. I can’t go too much into it, but the feelings and actions of the moment just did not match.
I also thought this would be more creepy due to the cover, but it really wasn’t. I was surprised Jo could not see the answers in front of her as the evidence continued to pile on, since I myself already figured who done it right after it happened.
Also, in one chapter her mother sucks.